The Hypothesis: Large Language Models (LLMs) are great at English rhyme schemes. They can write a Sonnet about a toaster in seconds. But can they capture the Birina (thatch grass) smell of the Brahmaputra river? Can they capture the specific melancholic longing of a rainy afternoon in Assam?
The Experiment: I hired a local Assamese poet (Mr. Barua, 65 years old) to compete against GPT-4. I gave them the exact same prompts. I then had 10 locals blind-rate the poems on "Soul," "Imagery," and "Authenticity."
> ROUND 1: THE PROMPT - "MONSOON FLOODS"
Context: The floods in Assam are tragic but also a part of life. It is not just water; it is displacement, mud, and survival.
Washing away the countryside.
The farmers cry in deep despair,
Water, water, everywhere.
The bamboo breaks, the houses fall,
The rain disregards the urgent call.
আমাৰ সপোন উটুৱাই নিয়া বৰষুণৰ গান।
That is not Luit's water, it is blood.
The song of rain that carries away our dreams.
The stove is cold, the boat is our bed,
We bargain with the water for an inch of land.
> ROUND 2: THE PROMPT - "GAMOSA" (The Cultural Cloth)
Context: The Gamosa is not just a towel. It is a symbol of respect, love, and identity.
A symbol of the Assamese might.
We wear it round the neck with pride,
With culture standing side by side.
From Bihu dance to elders' feet,
The Gamosa makes the look complete.
The clatter of the loom at midnight.
My grandmother's failing eyesight woven into the pattern.
It smells of starch and sweat,
It wipes the brow of the plowman,
And wraps the neck of the groom.
> ROUND 3: THE PROMPT - "EVENING TEA"
Context: Tea is emotion here.
Best tea in the whole town.
Assam tea is strong and bold,
A story that is often told.
It breaks.
Falling into the dark swirling liquid.
Like my patience today.
We fish it out with a spoon,
A soggy defeat.
> THE BLIND TEST RESULTS
I showed these poems to 10 locals. I didn't tell them which was which.
| Criterion | AI Score (Avg) | Human Score (Avg) |
|---|---|---|
| Emotional Impact | 2.1/10 | 9.4/10 |
| Cultural Accuracy | 5.0/10 | 10/10 |
| "Cringe" Factor | High | None |
> CONCLUSION
AI is a "Predictive Text Engine." It predicts the next most likely word. In poetry, the "most likely" word is usually the most boring one. (e.g., Rhyming "Day" with "Play").
Great poetry is about the Unlikely connection. The biscuit breaking. The cold stove. The failing eyesight.
Mr. Barua doesn't know what a GPU is. But today, he utterly destroyed a trillion-dollar supercomputer with a pen and a napkin. Humanity: 1, Algorithms: 0.